Friday, March 9, 2012

Carrie an Outcast

Author’s Note: This piece of writing is describing the main character Carrie from the book “Carrie”.
Carrie White is a seventeen year old girl that went to high school. She was an outcast at her school. She was so used to everybody making fun of her and being mean to her she thinks the same things about herself, she tells herself that nobody want to look at me because it stings their eyes . She has dull brown hair that falls just past her shoulders with a little curl. She has pimples on her back, face and shoulders. She is a heavier girl, well heavier than everybody at her school. She lives in a house that looks like an old run down shack with no life in it anymore with her mother.
Carrie’s mother is insane as kids running around without getting fed or can’t go outside. She makes Carrie go into a small, dark closet that stunk like rotten eggs with stains all over the floor and pray, because she thinks that she is a devil spawn. She abuses her and she brings her confidence down and she doesn’t even like herself because of her mother. Her mother has more power over her than the kings of Great Britain did back in the day. Carrie is really scared to death of her mother; she can’t stand to be around her. Carrie misses her father very much; he died when she was young. Her teachers don’t help the situation when they call her out at school and give attention to her. Carrie’s strong on the outside like superman but deep down she is like a little kitten wanting a home. She is just a girl that doesn’t have a great house hold and no friends. She deals with all her problems alone, but she has gotten used to it. Carrie really needs someone to hold and take care of her better than what she has now.

1 comment:

  1. you did a really good job describing Carrie, but could use more descriptive words in the first paragraph.Over all GOOD job :)

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